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Wednesday, April 13, 2011

Sand Dunes.

We ran along the beachside to the humongous sand dune A.K.A Killer.It was complicated to get to the top of the sandy dune.Some people were out of power.The sand was soft and cuddely.By the time I got up there I felt DIZZY because the sun was gleaming in my eyes.I jumped on a board for a crazy ride.Lots of sand got in my eyes it was stinging like hell.When I got to the bottom I felt stiff as a statue.I climbed back up it was a breath taking ride.My feet and back were really painful.
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 15, 2011 at 9:58 PM

    wow that was a fun camp aye

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  2. ataiapaJune 20, 2011 at 5:35 PM

    what I liked about it
    I liked my humor and I had interesting words like painful

    What I did well
    I used alot of interesting words.

    What could I do better.

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  3. ataiapaJune 21, 2011 at 2:46 PM

    I think I did a really good piece of writing and put in alot of interesting words eg Gleaming.

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  4. salma abdallaJune 23, 2011 at 3:58 PM

    you did a realy good piece of writting acacia

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