It was a hot,breezy day when all of a sudden there was an ugly witch standing in front of Rapunzel. The Witch gave Rapunzel a sweet red apple which made her feel dizzy. Rapunzel fainted when she realised her hair was falling out from the apple, it was poisoned. Prince Cory pulled up on his horse”Rapunzel,Rapunzel aaah Rapunzel” he cried.
The Prince was shocked to see Rapunzel look like this .Rapunzel lived in the smallest tower of three in Far Far Awayville. There was only one option he said. Prince Cory carried Rapunzel down the vine and onto his horse.They rode past waving trees, swishing through the warm breeze
Prince Cory had found some magical apples so he gave a couple to Rapunzel. Thank you cried Rapunzel running to the horse.”Yay” she yelled..Rapunzel’s goldish hair had grown back....She lived happily ever after.
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ReplyDeleteWhat I liked?
I liked all the desriptive words I used in the story!
What I could of done better!
umm I could of made it sound more realistic.